Too Perfect

 

Chapter 6:  Hopeless

 

Day had finally turned to night and a bleak darkness settled around us.  Only the dim light of the moon kept us from running into every other shrub and tree in our path.  The forest only added to my horror.  It was incredibly terrifying at night.  Each tree branch looked like a gnarled claw reaching out to strangle you.  They seemed to grab at your hair and your clothes, tangling you up.  The moonlight cast shadows that seemed to dance like little demons through the brush.  They taunted you to come and join their satanic worship.
   

Then there were the noises.  There were the owl hoots, the howls of coyotes, the rodents scrambling along the forest floor.   The sounds swirled around you, unceasing even for an instant.  Till they got to the point where they were so maddening that you wanted to scream for them to shut up before they sent you over the edge.  And of course the fact that we had guns pressed to our backs didn't help either.
    

We walked for what seemed like hours.  Every inch of the forest looked exactly the same as another.   It felt like you were going nowhere.  I had no idea how these men had any idea where they were going.  And what was worse was it started to rain.  The water came pouring down soaking all of us to the bone.  I was cold, tired, terrified and in pain.  I couldn't conceive anything worse.
    

Eventually our trek through the woods ended, but the nightmare was still only beginning.  We came to a long ago abandoned road.  It was overgrown by plants and grass.  The old gravel barely visible under the brush.  On the road was a semi truck.  It was unmarked.  The other man, whose name we had discovered was Jeff, disappeared into the back of the truck and reappeared with some rope.  Without any resistance from any of us they bound our hands and our feet.
   

Rick picked me up and tossed me hard into the back of the truck.  Pain ripped through my body as I landed hard on one of my arms.  I cried out tears filling my eyes.  By the end of this I was almost certain Rick would kill me.  He seemed to be rougher with I than everyone else.  I weakly sat up and leaned against a crate.  Soon we were all tied up and in the back of the truck.  They shut the door and pitch blackness surrounded us.  The pain from my arm was so great I could feel myself approaching unconsciousness.  The world seemed to spin a bit.
   

“Lisa,” I could faintly hear Brian calling my name.
   

I let out a slight moan and passed out.

 

    

Brian heard her groan slightly and then there was silence.  He could hear his heart beat as it pounded in his chest.
   

“Lisa!” he called out again this time more urgently.
   

“I think she passed out,” Anita said from somewhere in the blackness.
   

Brian hated this not being able to see anything.  He could now see how incredibly horrible it would be to be blind.
   

“How can we be sure?” Brian asked weakly fearing the worst.
   

“We can't,” A.J. said matter of factly, no emotion in his words.
   

“Alex, shut up!” Anita said angrily.  “She's not dead.  She only fell on her arm.  You are just making things worse.”
   

“Whatever,” he said.  “We will all be dead eventually anyway.”
   

“What the hell has gotten into you!?” Anita yelled at him not so much frustrated at him but at the entire situation.
   

Anita liked to be in control of the situation and for once she was not.
   

“It's hopeless,” he said.
   

“If you do not have anything positive to offer just be quiet!” Anita growled annoyed.
   

“What ever you say, Madame,” he replied cold-heartedly.
   

Brian was sure he could hear Anita crying lightly.  A.J. was showing much support.
   

“Well be okay, Nita,” Brian said soothingly.
   

She muttered something that sounded like "I hope."  He only wished he was certain in his own comment as well.  They spent the rest of the ride in silence.  Brian spent the time praying over and over that they would all make it out alive.

 

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